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The Gruesome Tale of Dr Schlieffer
What follows is the story of how Dr Schlieffer met his maker by trying to be god....
Dr Schlieffer greets his new assistant (or component)
He shows the newcomer the invention
Sneakily stabbing him in the back
The assistant falls to the ground without time to make a noise
As he is turned over his blood creeps across the floor
Dr Schlieffer cuts the assistant's head open...
...and takes out the brain
Then he programs the assistant's brain ready for use
His machine 'dings' indicating the brain is ready
Carefully he takes the brain up to the robotic exoskeleton
He inserts it into the head of the machine
Then he puts the lid back on
'Clunk'
Dr Schlieffer steps back waiting for signs of life
It moves!
The arms unfold
and it takes it's first steps
"Hooray!"
The robot begins to show signs of aggression
The scientist realises that it's all going wrong
But it's too late for him!
"aaarrrrggggh!"
The Dr slumps to the floor dead
and the robot walks away realising that there is another body in the chamber
It shows vague signs of recognition
It picks up the body and realises that it used to belong to him
The robot cannot handle what it has become
It curls into a ball
And the machinery quakes unable to contain the brain's rage
The robotic exoskeleton falls in pieces to the floor and all is still...
THE END
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| JeremyLego | Much Fun!!! | 0 | Nov 6 2006, 6:00 PM EST by JeremyLego | ||
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Thread started: Nov 6 2006, 6:00 PM EST
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That was the best bestiness I've seen in a long while. Very fun and perfectly grasping at the Halloween spirit.
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| almaxr | Congratulations Katmax! | 0 | Nov 3 2006, 4:00 AM EST by almaxr | ||
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Thread started: Nov 3 2006, 4:00 AM EST
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That's a really great entry you built! I'm glad to see you back in the competition, especially as you missed September. Keep up the hard work!
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| katmax1611 | Yay I got it in! | 3 | Nov 3 2006, 3:57 AM EST by katmax1611 | ||
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Thread started: Oct 27 2006, 5:20 PM EDT
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I'm happy I finished my entry, as I had loads of homework during the school term and wasn't able to enter the last competition.
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